Even here the question arises: Why demand BLACK AND WHITE. Does the story really depend on it? But weíre not going to argue with Trottier here, right?
To give you an idea what you may experience when you decide to write a note to the reader, here an example I made myself with professional feedback.
In my script something was happening in the middle of several characters present in the scene. However only one of them could see it. I constructed the narrative so that from the visuals that should be clear. However, I just wanted to make sure the reader gets it and thus wrote this: